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few suggestions:
The wind has already got cold -->> the wind has already gotten cold
Laughing voices fills the air whitely -->> laughing voices fill the air whitely (it's just a matter of agreement)
and the last part is a bit awkward, maybe something along the lines of:
Why sometimes can't I speak honestly?
Why sometimes can't I be tender?
Why sometimes do we hurt each other?
Why sometimes do we check each other?
Why sometimes does my heart ache so much
Why always does my heart go out to you?
I can't think of anyone but you
I can't think of anyone but you
OR
Why can't I sometimes speak honestly?
Why can't I sometimes be tender?
Why do we sometimes hurt each other?
Why do we sometimes check each other?
Why does my heart sometimes ache so much?
Why does my heart always go out to you?
I can't think of anyone but you
I can't think of anyone but you
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