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Old 3rd December 2008, 02:46 AM
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^Melrose understands what happened and so does everyone else. It was something of a misunderstanding.

There was no need for you to bring it up at all. Agreeing with Deli is fine, but singling him out, is rude. It's over, and it's not like he kept doing it or anything. He even sent masa a PM about it. A big chunk of your very long post in unnecessary.

but anyway...
Thank you for your new version. The English does flow very well, but I think you should be careful if you move away from the literal translation, of how you structure it. I think it would look and sound better if some things weren't in four line stanzas.

But that's just my opinion.
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