Ayumi Hamasaki Sekai - View Single Post - [romaji and translation] Days
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Old 5th December 2008, 10:56 PM
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Though it's true I spend some nights
Feeling so sad
And feeling a tightning in my chest
You should change that to include the repeteated JP words for painfully/whatever, so it starts with that and twice.
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