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Originally Posted by Melrose
Hmm, okay. But I think you should consider just leaving it out. For any song it's strange to put in a word that isn't really there, and with this song especially it's strange as it's not necessarily directed at a male person.
You can say 'I want to show my smile' without meaning specifically everyone and him. it gets the idea across.
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In japanese songs, they almost never actually say "him."
It's so weird to say that one.
But it's faithful to the song.
She is a woman, she is Ayumi Hamasaki, and we know she is singing to a boy.
And she mentions in the beginning how his smile is so sparkles and kind
So I think its better to say "to him", because it loses the comparison if you dont... =\