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masa, so where are you going to put your "though"?
if you think it modifies/links 4 to 5 and 5 to 6, how are you going to do that in english....?
maybe use two "though"s?
just using one "though" does not link 4 to 5 AND 5 to 6...
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also what makes you think she is calm/not calm in these stanzas? certainly not the way she sings them...
They're both negative, so how does 'though' work? it doesn't work in english...
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