Quote:
Originally posted by nmskalmn
"On the morning the phone started to ring, breaking the silence"
This also seems unnatural, but I don't know how to explain why. Here is another way of saying it that sounds better to me:
"On the morning after, the phone started to ring, breaking the silence"
|
Hmm... perhaps it can also be said like this:
"In this morning, the phone began to ring, breaking the silence"
"The phone started to ring in the morning, breaking the silence"
Also:
"The season has changed and I feel it's biting cold"
Perhaps "bitter" could be an alternate word, although "biting" fits as well
