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Old 25th March 2010, 08:37 PM
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>追伸:マサさん、ファースト・サビは2回目に「与えて教えてくれる… あなたが」で終わりますのでご注意 く ださい。
Oh, I didn't notice that. I corrected the parts. (You seem good at writing Japanese, too.)

I also changed some parts of my translation. Thanks for your suggestions.
To change --> Change
crouched --> crouched down
I’ll not --> I won’t
you've always given and taught me --> you always give and teach me
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