^ i realise nume was just a typo on your part, but i thought it best to point out to you
well, i think you might be right about the [daremo kamo] section, but i'm sure i can clearly hear [maku wo orosu] or something, there is definitely a [su] sound there, not [ri]...
also, i would very much recommend you alter [i adore nothing but my uncool spots] this is something you have directly translated i believe, it is not sound like correct english, nor does [it would be rather easier for me to stay here, but with no enthusiastic stimulation]
firstly you should not use the comparative of easy proceeding rather, and secondly -no enthusiastic stimulation- sounds more like a robot singing and sits very awkwardly with the rest of the piece, i suggest you edit these parts...