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1. It's good to use [it's ... that] here. But I have some other questions. I feel "kakkowarui" has stronger meaning than "unattractive" and it should be translated to "uncool" or "awkward". The other point is "part". It's clear that she is saying about her mental side, not physical side. Is it clear, if we use the word "part"?
2. I change this part according to your suggestion. Thank you.
3. I think "nothing consumes me with stimulation" is a good translation.
Last edited by masa; 28th March 2010 at 05:48 PM.
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