
2nd April 2010, 10:12 AM
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ANGEL'S SONG H-Initiate
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Anaheim, California
Posts: 35,493
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For the palms line, I think it'd be better to say "You are in the palm of my hand" since that's how it's usually said... I think. Right? -scratches head-
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