[primavera♥]

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"* Because we started to walk, and we don't need a reason for that
the comma is unnecessary
Because we know at least that we are just OK, we are OK now
"at least" and "just" mean the same thing in this sentence

I know painfully, your feelings are reaching me without change
should be "painfully know" the adverb ALWAYS comes before the verb. The comma isn't necessary either
Because our promise that we would share everything is not a lie at all
This makes no sense, should it be "Because OF our promise"? The "that" is also unnecessary"

ummm. . . a lot of the things dont really matter and some are wrong. im no English major. just a freshman in high school. but here

firsstly, because it is a compound sentence a comma is necessary, right? at least thats what i was taught.
also adverbs so do not come right before the verb all of the time. they often come after and that is correct.
-also the "that" in the last statement may be unnecessary but it is not wrong. so if ayu wanted it that way then it should stay. often people add excess "that"s to their sentences. actually re-readaing the sentence. i see no serious issue with it at all. "because of" sounds strange in the context

there are other little issues to your corrections and a lot is just something that ayu may have seriously written as masa said

if u have some proof that i am wrong u can say so of course
but i really dont think you should be correcting masa so much. especially when its wrong


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anyway. thank you masa and these are lovely lyrics ^___^ very heartwarming