I think the shot is good, but she really really needs to stop with those lips, it's already enough, seriously....
i have to say they probably overdid the body on that profile angle photo... the line is just too straight to be natural, in general they always soften the lines on girls in photos so I wouldn't be surprised if they did the same with Ayu, as good as she looks in real, it's never good enough for magazines, cuz they want the unexisting perfection.