[ayumi1121]

thanks!
I found a few things that were just little mistakes
in the first line it should be "egao erande"
and in the second "serifu narabete
and "dare ni muke ta" instead of "dare ni muke da" and "nanno tame" instead of "dame"
"mamoritai mono" instead of "mamori daimono"
"shyouchi" instead of "jyouchi"
"hiraiteke baii" instead of "a itekewaii"
"kotae" instead of "kodae"
....seems like it's just some of the t's and d's