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Corrections for criminal (i'm SO SORRY i'm being so nitpicky but i wanted to help ^^):
First line should probably be "chinmoku" not "jibun no ku"
Fourth line, "munaka" might be "mune ga"
Second stanza, 1st line: "mudashi" is probably "watashi"
Second stanza, 2nd line: i think "hon ka" should be spaced "honka"
End of second stanza, "koto de da kimi ni" sounds more like "koto ga dekinai"
Chorus, first line, "to wai ranai" should be spaced "to wa iranai"
Chorus, second line, "ira" sounds more like "ii wa" and "tattakau" should be "tatakau"
2nd verse, first line: "tsuyuku aritari" should be "tsuyoku aritai"
2nd verse, third line: "nanitao" should be "nanika wo"
2nd chorus, first line: "tattou itsuku da wo" should be "tadori tsuku darou"
2nd chrorus, 3rd line: "a" should probably be "wa", but it's too hard to hear exactly what she's saying... could be anything really but I know "a" isn't a word on its own.
Now for "In the Corner"...
First line: "o hito ni" should be "wo hitori"
Second line: should probably be "okizuri ni shite kieterishinai" (not sure about that last word though)
First chorus, second line should be "shinjiteru toka eien da toka de"
First chorus, last line: "de redemo" should be "dare demo"
Second verse, second line: "ososhii kunaru" should be "osoroshiku naru"
Second chorus, third line should probably be "iu kanjou wa kokoro no okuso koto"
Bridge line should probably be "kaku kou nara mou sude ni kireta wa"
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