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Originally Posted by truehappiness
Is there a way to make the last line clearer?
'And I gave way to tears, too'
Just wondering if it could be worded differently or something since it doesn't feel like it fits the end~
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I think Masa's translation of that line was pretty accurate. The only grammatical mistake is there would be no comma between tears and too. Perhaps this flows a bit better: "And I gave way to tears as well."