Thanks for the translation, masa!
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Originally Posted by Melrose
Edit: Oh yea, "And laugh with a mischievous look"; "look" would be better as "face". You can't really have a mischievous look unless you dress up like Britney Spears with a whip. A face is more like an expression, which is what Ayu meant, IMO.
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I think that part is fine. A "look" can be a facial expression. "Face" just seems awkward to me.
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Originally Posted by Melrose
"You taught it to me
Let's do a miracle"
You should rephrase "Let's do a miracle", 'cause it sounds hilarious. XD
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I agree with that, heh. Maybe it could be more like, "Let's make this a miracle."