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Old 14th August 2003, 11:08 PM
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Still Alone (Ayu-mi-x 4 version)

It starts off with a view of Manhattan in the future. There's some flashing effects (somewhat like the Above & Beyond PV), which you see Ayu flashing on the screen (Note that the first scenes happen in the day). You see Ayu walking down a street, looking at some kids playing (again, this is the future, so some things appear futuristic, such as the streets and cars). At 0:55, you see her singing, with the background getting a bit dark. Ayu imagines a boyfriend she once had (not Nagase), with the two hugging and such. At 1:37, it's a view of a bustling street, with a sort of "Ray of Light" feeling to it (i.e. Ayu's dancing with the city seeming to whisk by her). She's running to her boyfriend, whom now wanted to leave her, crying. At 1:52, she stops running, singing, but with a tear in her eye. At 2:04, the city's going right by her, as she once again does her gestures (holding her hand to her chest and reaching an arm to the sky). At 2:32, there's panoramic shots of the city, with several flying cars and large buildings everywhere. It becomes sunset. At 3min exactly, you see Ayu fading in and out, kind of falling when she's fading. Ayu soon meets up with the new girl, but doesn't do anything but walk away, since she's not afraid to be alone. At 3:31 (with the techno beats), It's now night in NY and Ayu's falling from a building. She thinks of the good times she had with her boyfriend, the walks they had, as well as them kissing. But she doesn't try to cry (altho her eyes get watery). At 4:53, there's more shots of Ayu dancing on the street with the "rapid moving" effect like Madonna's "Ray of Light" (it also splits into the view of Ayu falling). As she gets closer to the ground (5:22), everything leads up to her waking up in her bed, looking at her hand and noticing the ring of her fiancee (the boyfriend), and she slowly closes her eyes.

Note that this would occur if the ending of the song ended, instead of mixing into I am... !

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Old 14th August 2003, 11:32 PM
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hm. i have an idea for "lady marmalade"

(referring to my parody tracklist)
ok her, christina aguilera, lil kim, and ashley(ayurocks) are dancing in little skimpy outfits. jerms, jose, and zef are the "sexy guys" in the video that are there just for uh. decoration muahahaha want a screenshot of ayu's outfit? look at my "&" cover that was unsubmitted
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Old 15th August 2003, 12:03 AM
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[Over]

A young man starts playing the piano, while somewhere ayu's walking on a dark corridor. She starts singing and finds a hallway full with as many doors as u can imagine. She opens a door and sees a young girl sitting on the floor in the middle of the room; slowly, she closes the door. She opens another door, it's empty so she goes inside all the while singing. Then by the time she reaches the window the she starts singing the chorus. Snow starts falling, and ayu starts crying. The wind opens the windows... the young man and the piano suddenly appear in the middle of the room, ayu walks towards them and sits beside the young man. She rests her head on his shoulder and closes her eyes.
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Old 15th August 2003, 12:08 AM
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*song: Can't fight the moonlight by lean rimes

pv:the pv starts in the middle of the night showin this big full moon. then it shows this boy name mrAznnizeguy runnin in the forest. he seems to be runnin away from someone. It turns out to be ayumi and mraznnizeguy is tryin to resist and trying to hide from her kisses but in the end he surrenders haha btw you have to know the lyrics for the song
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Old 15th August 2003, 08:31 PM
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Ourselves sounds like it would be a great horror music video.

It would be really stylish, like the PV is already. LOL

Ourselves:
Set up Ayu wanting revenge on someone. Perhaps someone cheating on her.

Music starts (the slow introduction)
Cut to survelliance camera showing her boyfriend with another girl. Ayu has jet black hair, dressed as an unstable psychotic ßitch.
Her boyfriend and other girl kiss on camera, cut to Ayu's hand picking up something large (like a coffe cup) and smashing it against the screen. [the kiss, and smash and hand movement all go along with the beats of the song]'

First verse:
Ayu barges through two large doors into a long hallway, barely lit with doors on each side, no windows. She struts down the hallway turning to anotehr one with the same atmosphere but this time instead of doors, it's windows. As the song transitions itself into the first chorus she smashes one of the windows with her fist sideways as she is walking at a brisk pace.

Chorus to the second verse:
She continues down the window hallway as the chorus finishes. She beats one of the doors open. Its his office. She russells all his papers up. Papers are flying all thorugh the room as she pushes computer over, sparks flying and glass breaking. [When the chorus reaches the part when it breaks for awhile, the song stops and the sounds of the office are heard. She smiles, and picks up a pole or axe thats in the corner of the office for some reason... something large, anything will do]

Chorus continues to end of song:
She gets out of the office and walks down the main stairway and outside. Close up to her singing the verses. She stands face to face with her cheating boyfriend outside. [as ayu says the last phrase she flings the pole/axe/large object to his car smashing the windshield. [camera swings around the couple]

[Camera swings back to ayu's backside walking away]

Das Ende.
The end. Fin.

haha Little too much detail. I think it would look neat.

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Old 16th August 2003, 01:36 AM
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Shizzat!Forking-A!!!-_-;;I made one for July 1st and now I can't find it!This pisses me off!
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Old 17th August 2004, 08:33 AM
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i want ayu to sing like the corrs.
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Old 18th August 2004, 12:27 AM
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Let's see o_o A PV for Dolls *-*

She enters a a park, the day is very dark and rainy.
She sees a girl (16 years, more or less) with a guy much older than her (34 years, sth like that) together, sitting in the ground and talking. The girl is crying a lot and very angry with the man.
Ayu goes on singing the song sitting in the ground too, watching the lovers arguing. In the end, the girl stops arguing and goes away, without saying a word to the man o.o and everything finishes sadly.
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Old 20th July 2006, 01:08 PM
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I Am...

Listen closely, because I'll keep screaming until you understand:
I've been here, here, here forever.


She'd be swimming in an ocean, she'd be a mermaid(yayness)

What is at the end of these half-tiresome
days that are chased by time?

Is it funny to you that I'm rushing
through life? Go ahead and laugh.

and you would see her swimming along with a bunch of humans, as they look at her in either amazement or disgust. She'd just be looking around, and eventually she's swim away alone.

I want you to stare into my eyes and say my name.
I want you to hold my hand and tell me it'll be ok.
Help me; if you don't, I don't think I can make it.
If this is a lie, then at least keep the lie going to the end.


She'd turn back to see a human man try to follow her. He goes up to catch his breath, and Ayu pauses in her movement to swim up towards him.

I entrust my body to the flow of time.
Where will I wash ashore?

Despite my faults, will I be forgiven?
Please tell me.


She swims towards the shore with him, he has to leave for a while, and she moves closer and closer to him, eyes to eyes, but then she dips herself back into the water.

Please understand, that's not what I'm saying.
Please notice, this isn't what I want.
Please let me go, I don't want to go there.
I've been searching for just one word.


He tries to chase her in the water but she swims too quickly for him.

I want you to stare into my eyes and say my name.
I want you to hold my hand and tell me it'll be ok.
Help me; if you don't, I don't think I can make it.
If this is a lie, then at least keep the lie going to the end.


She keeps simming and eventually she stops and looks back to see no one. She has a sad, distant look in her eyes. Then, the place changes and you see (human) Ayu walking around a lake singing to song, her outfit very light, giving that fluid mood in the air. She sings the song with emotion, her hand reaching out like she does a lot^^.

Please understand, that's not what I'm saying.
Please notice, this isn't what I want.
Please let me go, I don't want to go there.
I've been searching for just one word.

It goes back to Ayu-mermaid, and she keeps swimmming and swimming, you see in the faded background of the screen the Human Ayu by the lake singing out, and then you see the human man from ealier. he's searching for her again, just as Ayu's searching. It ends with the screen going back to human Ayu, and it finds the mermaid Ayu....the screen fading out...



Tell me if that's good or not, please comment^^ hopefully i'll be famous and have crazy pvs like such!
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For all the words unspoken
I keep to myself because I’m selfish
I don’t speak to you because I think you’re selfish
Can’t there be an easier way?

My mind trespasses a vacant heart
But it soon learns of the orphan of secrets
Held inside
Why can’t I just foster my emotions
Like you had
Like all of you had?

In the stormy season
We often admire the rain
Why is it so admirable?
What’s so blissful about crying skies?
Nothing’s blissful about running mascaras
And gasping orbs of emotion
Smeared liner of depression
Drenched cheeks with forged smiles

The colder it is
The warmer we truly feel, right?
So can’t you just accept the secrets
And put away the selfish mindset
Because I can’t do the same thing.

-Yume (ME!! i wrote it!! lalala...)
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Old 20th July 2006, 07:15 PM
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Daybreak "Original mix"

It begins like the H/\L's mix PV, with her walking up the road...when the rockish part starts,it flashes to a shot of her in a gazebo, with white ribbons all over it, blowing in the wind *like on her dress*, then the verse and pre-chorus would be like the H/\L's Mix PV, and the chorus, back to the gazebo. i kinda thought it would give the PV more scenery, because, even though it is good, its a little dry cuz she doesn't move much.

Immature "Album Version" or "JT CM version" it works well with both

During the first words, its a shot of just her head, looking down as if hypnotized, and starts looking. it's raining. then with the music starting, she starts walking down a beautiful decorated hallway *think of a hotel suite hallway* and when the verse starts, she starts leaning up against the wall singing, and she slowly makes her way down the hall still up against the wall, and for the chorus, picture the next-to-last page in the MY STORY booklet...she's in a room, and flower petals are falling while she sings all happy like her face on the picture. then it repeats, until the bridge, which she sings like the opening words with the first shot, but the hypnotized look is gone from her face.

these are all i have right now. i might post my HOPE or PAIN and July 1st ones later, if i feel like typing them
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Old 20th July 2006, 07:19 PM
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Wow this is an old thread o__o
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Old 20th July 2006, 07:24 PM
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lol i know...but i had to tell someone about these PV ideas
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