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Old 27th September 2010, 01:41 AM
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really beautiful
thank you masa
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Old 27th September 2010, 02:00 AM
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Thank you again masa!

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In the summer days, feeling strong sunshines painfully
should probably be rephrased to "painfully feeling strong sunshine" =)
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Old 27th September 2010, 04:38 AM
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a sweetened version of SEASONS :-D

i like the "kira kira kira" part.
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Old 27th September 2010, 04:48 AM
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Old 27th September 2010, 11:46 AM
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should probably be rephrased to "painfully feeling strong sunshine" =)
OK. I change the part. Thanks.
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Old 29th September 2010, 07:45 AM
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a sweetened version of SEASONS :-D

i like the "kira kira kira" part.
Totally!

This song has a really unique feel to me for an Ayu song, but I really really like it. I'm so happy this "maxi-single" turned out so great!

Oh and thank you Masa!
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Old 30th September 2010, 09:09 AM
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Thanks for the translation!

I got most of this wrong when I listened to it. XD. Damn my Japanese is getting a but rusty. ARGH!
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Old 1st October 2010, 06:07 PM
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I corrected some parts, according to the original lyrics.

Setsunai teritsukeru --> Setsuna ni teritsukeru
Sonna kisetsu mo --> Sou donna kisetsu mo

And accordingly, I changed some parts of my translation.

painfully feeling strong sunshine --> transitorily feeling strong sunshine
We were together in such seasons --> Yes, we were together in any season
We got over such seasons --> Yes, we got over any season
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Old 5th October 2010, 12:47 PM
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In the winter days, when our fingertips were trembling in the freezing cold
We warmed each other's heart, didn't we?
This sort of reminds me of the stories of people waiting in the cold for Ayu in London, haha.
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Old 5th October 2010, 11:18 PM
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For as simple as it (mostly the structure) seems, it's so wonderful. She's a wonderful writer. Thank you, masa.
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