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24th May 2005, 06:01 PM
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ok here i am ....i had 2 get dressed and watch jerry springer ~chants-jer-ry,jer-ry~
n-e-ways be-sec & chours: {still singing} ayu closes her eyes and then there is a flash and it show ayu and the guy outside in the park making a snowman and throwing snow balls at eachother when a black car pulls up and 2 guys get out and start walking tward the guy....the guy sees them coming so he begains to walk tward them also.....ayu is putting a scarf on the snowman while the guys chat.....1 of the guys pushes the guy that is w/ ayu and he says somthing 2 him and then both of the guys walk back to the car and leave.......the guy that is w/ ayu walks twards her in a angery rage...she sees him and she turns around asks him whats wrong....he gives her a weak smile and says nothing......they continue to work on the snow man..... verse(s): they complete the snowman and begin to walk through the park holding hands while the snow is falling...camra gose back to the apartment ayu is in the kitchen pouring 2 glasses of white wine......the guy walks in the door and ayu turns around to greet him w/the glass of whinewhen she notices he has a black eye and he is bleeding.....she walks over to him and trys to get a closer look @ his face he pushes her away...... be-sec & chours: is flashes back to them walking and holding hands in the park a group 0f kids run past them i of them falls and the guy helps the kid get up and dust himself off then he runs away to try to catch up w/the other kids.......ayu stands there w/ a smile on her face he turns aroud and begins to walk tward her...when he reachs her he takes her by both hands and kisses her and then they continue to walk through the park ..... bridge: as they r walking 1 of the guys from before stopped them and started to say somthing 2 the guy.......then 2 more guys come and srround them......the guy that is w/ ayu told her to get back and then he begin to plead w/ guys.... ayu is stand there in a state of fear......the guy that stopped them hit's the guy that is w/ayu and then the other guy jumps in and they both start to beat him up....... ayu begins to run tward him but she is stopped by the 3rd guy who holds her back kicking and screaming his name.......the guys finished beating him up and the guy the was holding you let her go she ran over to him.......... outro1: there is a flash and it gose back to them walking hold hands......and then there is another flash and it shows her opening up her eyes and looking around the apartment and then she looks down and sees the guy w/ his head on her chest and she kisses him on the forehead........ the end 
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#22
24th May 2005, 06:32 PM
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^ I like your carols better than the video!
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#23
24th May 2005, 06:38 PM
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thanx......i'm gonna write 1 for ever free 2 i will post that 1 l8er
here is it all 2gether ok it here gose..... intro: it starts off w/the camra facing a window and outside the window it is snowing then it slowly pans away from the window to reveal an apartment and then it countinues until it reaches a couch in front of a fire place burnning bright{music starts}......the camra begins to move tward the couch there is ayu sitting there by herself looking down..(so u think)..the camra comes in front of the couch to reveal a guy that is sleeping w/ his head on ayus chest, ayu is stroking his head......{ayu starts to sing} be-sec & chours: {still singing} ayu closes her eyes and then there is a flash and it show ayu and the guy outside in the park making a snowman and throwing snow balls at eachother when a black car pulls up and 2 guys get out and start walking tward the guy....the guy sees them coming so he begains to walk tward them also.....ayu is putting a scarf on the snowman while the guys chat.....1 of the guys pushes the guy that is w/ ayu and he says somthing 2 him and then both of the guys walk back to the car and leave.......the guy that is w/ ayu walks twards her in a angery rage...she sees him and she turns around asks him whats wrong....he gives her a weak smile and says nothing......they continue to work on the snow man..... verse(s): they complete the snowman and begin to walk through the park holding hands while the snow is falling...camra gose back to the apartment ayu is in the kitchen pouring 2 glasses of white wine......the guy walks in the door and ayu turns around to greet him w/the glass of whinewhen she notices he has a black eye and he is bleeding.....she walks over to him and trys to get a closer look @ his face he pushes her away...... be-sec & chours: is flashes back to them walking and holding hands in the park a group 0f kids run past them i of them falls and the guy helps the kid get up and dust himself off then he runs away to try to catch up w/the other kids.......ayu stands there w/ a smile on her face he turns aroud and begins to walk tward her...when he reachs her he takes her by both hands and kisses her and then they continue to walk through the park ..... bridge: as they r walking 1 of the guys from before stopped them and started to say somthing 2 the guy.......then 2 more guys come and srround them......the guy that is w/ ayu told her to get back and then he begin to plead w/ guys.... ayu is stand there in a state of fear......the guy that stopped them hit's the guy that is w/ayu and then the other guy jumps in and they both start to beat him up....... ayu begins to run tward him but she is stopped by the 3rd guy who holds her back kicking and screaming his name.......the guys finished beating him up and the guy the was holding you let her go she ran over to him.......... outro1: there is a flash and it gose back to them walking hold hands......and then there is another flash and it shows her opening up her eyes and looking around the apartment and then she looks down and sees the guy w/ his head on her chest and she kisses him on the forehead........ the end Last edited by acimahs; 24th May 2005 at 06:53 PM.
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9th June 2005, 05:45 AM
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n-e-1 else ?
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9th June 2005, 08:20 AM
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Duty
Ayu is going on a road. Her arms and body is all in chains. She is dressed in a black leather suit(top & trouses). So, it's dark, and the road looks endless. When she starts to sing, she try to broke the chains, but still, she can't. When a chorus starts, she fall down and sing, try to get up, but she just can't! Then, it's becoming darker, and we see some huge black materia, that is going after Ayu, that destroys everything. Again Ayu sing. Then, suddenly the chains brake! She runs away from that dark thing. Then , when "kimi nara.." starts Ayu is near a cliff. She jumps from it into a sea and we saw her swimming under a sea. Then, she opens some kind of a golden ball, and then-golden light appears. Everything ends, dark materia goes away. Ayu, wearing a golden dress, is lying on a beach... THE END Actually, I have many visions of different PVs, really many. Can I write some more?
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9th June 2005, 08:41 AM
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HAPPY ENDING
Ayu is wearing a cute white dress, her hair is white. She is standing in a some kind of a flying ship, and there's a starry sky everywhere. On a head of this flying thing, there are roses. She sings there, while this thing is flying. When a chorus starts, she tries to hold up on a ship, `cause it's speed becomes SOOOO high. It's a strong wind and it's hard to stand there, but Ayu can. Then, when a second part of the song starts, Ayu sits on a head of the ship, looking at flowers and sining. So then, again a chorus part, the wind is blowing stronger and stronger...Ayu sits on a floor of this flying ship. *music* Closes her eyes. We see birds and then, a sun rising. *chorus starts* With sun is rising, Ayu holds a bird, and then, let it go. All roses, that were on a head of this flying thing, dissapear, and roses' petals are falling down just from a sky on Ayu, wind let them go to the all parts of this flying ship. Blue sky, birds, flower petals...Ayu, standing near the head of the flying-ship. And then, again, dark, starry sky. THE END
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9th June 2005, 05:18 PM
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and yes you can.......write as many as you want........
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9th June 2005, 06:48 PM
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9th June 2005, 07:17 PM
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Does anyone think I should write another one for hope or pain ?
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9th June 2005, 07:24 PM
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9th June 2005, 07:27 PM
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You read part 1 right ? I was think should I cotinue where I left off? Of make a whole new one?
Part 1 Hope or Pain Ayu is a homeless person who battles with cutting her self all the time. But struggles to sing for money (Since shes living in the street), Everyday she prays for a better life but nothing changes til one day she meets this guy who promises her Fame as a singer. All of a sudden Ayu's like is turned around and she is Rich and thinks her problem has been solved. Ayu marries the man and she noticed she stilll battles with Cutting her self. Being her husband he gambled,cheating, and put his self into so much debt he didn't know what to do.So he stole alll Ayu's money and fake his death. So now she broke and left with alll the debt her shoulders. Then she realized was this alll really worth it she as happier being homeless being in pain and regreting what she hoped for. Hope Or Pain ? She choose pain and became homeless again, Dies at the end of the Pv by Suicide.
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#38
10th June 2005, 02:14 AM
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ok here is my pv for ever free...kinda short but yet o so sweet
intro: {music starts}......it starts off w/the camara showing ayu from behind on a beach sitting in the sand near the water watching the sunset wearing a white dress w/white flowers in her hair and 2 white ribbons tied 2 both of her wrists w/flowers on them the camra zooms in on her {ayu starts to sing} ...... verse: the camara comes to the front of her as she is singing...she stands up and starts walk a few steps and then she stops and looks tward the sky facing the ocean the clouds cover the sun.....and from behind a guy rides past her on a black horse w/no saddle wearing black leaving a trail of white flower pettels..... be-sec: the camara (from a diffrent angle (above) shows ayu standing there looking tward the sky as the guy rides past her ...ayu looks to her right and she sees the guy on the black horse in the distance....... chours: she stands there in a state of shock.........she begians 2 run after him......as she is running after him she falls and gets back up and starts running again....... musical bridge: she catches up to him......he is standing there w/ the horse.....they are standing there face to face.......the camara zooms in on ayus face.....she is crying.....the guy reaches out w/ both hands....touches her face and wipes the tears from her eyes and kisses her on the forehead...... outro: the guy gets on his horse and begains to ride away.....as he is riding away the wind starts blowing and there is a bright light that blinds ayu she covers her eyes.......the guy disappears in the light and the cloud moves from in front of the setting sun......ayu uncovers her eyes and the 1st thing he sees is the sun disappearing in the distance.......... the end i hope u guys like it ^_^ i will be writing 1 for honey and heartplace next time Last edited by acimahs; 10th June 2005 at 05:50 PM.
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10th June 2005, 09:14 AM
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M
The video starts when we see Ayu preparing to the marrige. She has the same outfit, as in "M" Single cover. She starts to sing, we see a castle, and many maids, that are helping Ayu to prepare to the ceremony. Ayu is kinda like a..princess, yes. So, then, we see her future husband, that is standing in a church. He's nervous. Then, we see Ayu's future husband enemy on a horse. He comes to the church and hides. Then, with a chorus, we see how Ayu go on the red carpet to her husband. They are smiling to each other. People near them throw roses petals on a red carpet, while Ayu is going on it. So, Ayu stands near her husband and the ceremony starts. At the music time, Ayu's husband enemy immdeatly runs into the ceremony-hall and stoles Ayu! She starts to cry and sing whe chorus again appears. Then, we see a wood, road, where Ayu's enemy on horse is trying to escape and stole her from her husband. Her husband is running on horse for them too. Ayu is scared, very scared. Then, Ayu's husband catches up with this bad guy, and they start to fight by swords with each other. At the end, Ayu's husband wins, takes Ayu on his hourse. Ayu is happy and no longer scared. They run through the woods on a hourse together, hugging each other. THE END
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