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thanks masa!
one thing: 'Onegai soba ni ite' you've translated as: "I beg you, please stay by me" but this looks like you've translated 'onegai' twice. also, and more importantly, this line is already translated in the PV!! It's on the note, and is translated as: "Please stay with me" so I think you should just use this 'official' line too. again, thanks very much!
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Thanks Masa!
So this single is a fully broken-hearted single
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#23
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You don't have to be a chode about it.
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these are great lyrics! thanks!
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beautiful but typical lyrics.. the PV saved it all!
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#26
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Thanks for the lyrics, masa. ^^ |
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BALLAD is sure another Love Poem.
Fits perfectly with the PV~ Thanks masa!
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Thank you for your translation Masa.
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#29
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thanks masa...
another sad lyric T___T
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I love the lyrics... even more than You Were... they were... so much more indepth. So much more creative -- I don't know -- that's just what I feel at least. I love them...
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thank youuuu! i've been waiting for this..i just love the lyric and it really fit with the PV! ayuuu i love u!
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Thanks for the translation. Lovely lyrics. Definitely one of her better ballads in the recent years imo ^^
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You are welcome. I changed two parts, thanks to your suggestions.
I can no more hold on --> I can no longer hold on please stay by me --> please stay with me To: jon the d I translated the lyrics without watching the PV. I've seen it just now and confirmed that "soba ni ite" is translated into "please stay with me" in it. But where is "Onegai"? I was going to translate "Onegai" into "I beg you". Last edited by masa; 13th December 2009 at 01:15 PM. |
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thank you for the translation
BALLAD has so beautiful lyrics
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please forgive my poor japanese, but does "soba ni ite" actually include a 'please'? You've said that they translated it into "please stay with me", but I thought the 'please' was the translation of 'onegai'. am I wrong? does "soba ni ite" contain a 'please'? as well as the one from 'onegai?
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Well, I'm thinking now that "soba ni ite" corresponds to "stay with me" more than "please stay with me", as you say. So I can change like this.
Onegai soba ni ite -- Please stay with me Soba ni ite -- Stay with me But one problem is that "Soba ni ite" is clearly translated into "Please stay with me" in the PV, as you see. How do you think? |
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thx ^^
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Thank you masa!
the lyrics are really beautifull
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