'HEAVEN' romaji and translation

[evechoco]

thanks for the translation

thanks a lot for this translation.

[Khanh-Le]

i fell so like when i listen this song!

[Queen Bee]

Thanks for the translation.

[Jennie Mae]

It's just perfect. Thanks for another great translation masa!!

[masa]

You are welcome. I've corrected some parts of my translation after taking some advice.

What you offered straight to me
With a smile for the last time
Was just so beautiful
That I gave way to tears

Surely, that day
The two of us touched love

We sought for each other
Lost ourselves at times
And found each other at last
So whatever result may be waiting for us

It's nothing but
Destiny

la la la la la la la la la la
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In the sky you set out for
Stars are shining tenderly upon me

Stay by my side, my dear
Crossing over time and changing your shape
You see? The future we haven't yet seen
Remains here like this

Stay by my side, my dear
Crossing over time and changing your shape
The future we haven't yet seen
Remains here

Trust me, my dear
You live within me
So I'll never
Say good-bye to you

Surely, that day
The two of us touched love

[fallen_crystal_h]

Woah! The lyrics is perfect and touching!! I love it! Thank you very much, masa!!

[Mad_Cactuar]

Well, the full lyrics sounds like a normal song.. I prefer the more abstract type of lyrics, such as Ayu's "Duty", and Utada's "Be My Last"..

[gaara_is_hot18]

wonderful, amazing lyrics...thank you so much!

[Echiko]

^_^ Lovely!

[lotusoka]

thanks so much!

"Stars are shining tenderly upon me" ~~ so beautiful

[yamogi]

Originally Posted by masa

In the sky you set out for
Stars are shining tenderly upon me

=go to heaven

[extepan]

thanks masa!! the lyrics are so beautiful!

[DarkWanderer]

these are such beautiful lyrics! thanks for the translation

[Ourselves_Ayu]

After watching the PV, and seeing how she cried, I was deeply reminded of Hanabi II. Almost had me in tears, just like the Hanabi II PV. :/ Depressing, yet beautiful song. And the lyrics are very moving. I hope she wins some sort of award for this song. <33~

[Yarumi]

gosh, i can't get over how beautful this song is!

[jkm444]

thanks for da translation! This is my fav lyrics from her songs this year so far. Didn't like the lyrics for step you that much.

[jayx8318x]

Thanks for the lovely translation! The song is indeed beautiful.

I think someone might have mentioned this in another thread, concerning the phrase "my dear" is not adequate to translate "aisuru hito" ...why not use the phrase "my beloved" ?
"my dear" is something a mother or father can call their child, a friend to another friend, not exclusive to express the deep love of a man and woman, as "my beloved" is. Anyways, just my 2 cents

[masa]

>my dear" is something a mother or father can call their child, a friend to another friend, not exclusive to express the deep love of a man and woman, as "my beloved" is.

Really? I've heard of it for the first time. I'd like to hear the opinions of other English speakers about this.

[nmskalmn]

Originally Posted by masa

>my dear" is something a mother or father can call their child, a friend to another friend, not exclusive to express the deep love of a man and woman, as "my beloved" is.

Really? I've heard of it for the first time. I'd like to hear the opinions of other English speakers about this.

Both "dear" and "beloved" can be used for many kinds of relationships. I think "beloved" denotes a stronger, deeper attachment than "dear" does.