
27th December 2007, 01:41 AM
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Will Initiate
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Tennessee
Posts: 8,534
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Originally Posted by namiie
The ending was a little stupid though. Ayu and co. all have this look in their faces like, "Bwahaha, we fooled her." Err, what? Like they HAD to pretend to be puppets and now they're ~alive~? So what? They're still tiny...I think a better ending would've been like this: Ayu leaves the room, closes the door. As she closes the door behind her and looks ahead: WHITE DRESS PUPPET AYU stands right in front of her. Real Ayu looks shocked. Zoom in on real Ayu's eyes, which then become all white and plastic. Real Ayu turns into the marionette; puppet Ayu has broken free. Cliffhanger! Of course, that's just me.
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I actually like your ending better than the one in the PV.
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