4th June 2006, 08:23 PM
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ANGEL'S SONG H-Initiate
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Anaheim, California
Posts: 35,493
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Is there a way to make the last line clearer?
'And I gave way to tears, too'
Just wondering if it could be worded differently or something since it doesn't feel like it fits the end~
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