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Old 14th October 2003, 11:06 PM
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Question Has anyone ever tried to write their own lyrics/music?

Heres mine....please leave yours too!

Illusion

Throughout my life,
people entered, and people left.
But i never thought
that it would hurt as much as it did.

At times i felt alone,
like i was the only one in this world.
But you understood my pains.
We stood side-by-side,
hand-in-hand.
That was all i needed.

I spilled my life to you,
but you left violently with a lie
that had me fooled.
But it's funny how just one lie
can scar you for the rest of your life.

My life turned hollow,
and i felt like you took my life away with you
as if all i feelings were gone.
I began to lie to myself,
but after time, all these lies hast left my hear stone cold and shallow
I was afraid
to reveal the real me to anyone else.

you entered my life and left.
But i bet you didn't think
that you leaving had an impact on me like a cold winter storm.

You entered my life and left.
But i didn't know that it would hurt
as much as it did.

Love comes and goes
almost as if it were an illusion.


any criticism is appreciated


now....im gonna try to write music for it...somehow...maybe i can get a CD company to listen to dis

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