[romaji & translation] BALLAD

Miltonic · #1 12th December 2009, 08:42 PM

Thanks and beautiful lyrics but this part "Maybe, I can no more hold on" doesn't make sense, I suggest to change it to "Maybe, I can't hold on anymore" which would be the right way of putting it.

GRACE · #2 12th December 2009, 09:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Miltonic

Thanks and beautiful lyrics but this part "Maybe, I can no more hold on" doesn't make sense, I suggest to change it to "Maybe, I can't hold on anymore" which would be the right way of putting it.

or "I can no longer hold on"?