[Translation] FLOWER (lyrics)

[Aga-chan]

Originally Posted by tenshi no hane

You were smiling sweetly
Where did you disappear to?

You led me by the hand
That warmth still remains

I don't really like how those lines feel disconnected. Specially the first one.

The gently smiling you
Where did it disappear to?

Maybe change it to something like this?

冷たい目で should be "with cold eyes".

Thanks for the translation. ^^