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criminal HEARING lyrics.
>.< Yes, I know, I did a horrible job. But they're only hearing lyrics, so yeah. Never will I be as good at this as masa is. XD Oh, well. I tried. O_o Feel free to make corrections if you please.
kimi no chinmoku kana taku tsudzuketa tsudzuku hontou ni koe ni naranai sakebi ga kikoe uyo de mune ga harisakesou doushite konna ni watashi wa hidoku muruku de honka de tsurei bahetsu ni tesae mo momoru koto ga dekinai nee itsuka yurushi de hoshii to wa iranai sou kimi ga ii wa hitori tatakau no nara sore koso ga watashi e no tashika na tsuyoku aritai to deau amari ni kimi wa nani gau tomo ni nanika wo datoshi te watashi dakedo tame ni nee itsuka tadori tsuku darou ano basho e sou kimi ni tobi hiri no keshiki misetai sore koso ga ashita e no wa mirai e nee itsuka tattou itsuku da wo ano basho e sou kimi ni tobi hiri no keshiki misetai sore koso ga ashita e no a mirai e Last edited by fεяnαndδ; 27th December 2005 at 03:44 AM. |
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Nice ^_^ i was gonna do this, but i'm too lazy :x thank you!
here's my 2cents.... In the 1st stanza instead of kitto e it sounds like she's saying kikoe :x & in the 2nd one it sounds like the first word is doushite. Other than that, good job! ![]() |
#3
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^_~ Thanks!
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#4
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Oh, by the way, I'm doing In The Corner now. XD I'll add it to this thread.
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#5
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Quote:
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#7
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Ohhh! ^-^ Thank you! Silly me.
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#8
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IN THE CORNER
kou karanai de anata wo hitori okizuri ni shite kieterishinai dakedo watashi no aishiteru toka shinjiteru toka eien da toka de kotoba no ichiban utoka teru no wa kokoro dare demo naku watashi wa no anata ga amori ni kirei tsuki ru kara tokidoki hidoku osoroshiku naru dakera watashi no egao datta ni namida datta ni ikari datta ni to iu kanjou wa kokoro no okuso koto tsumidatte iru to wa kagiranai kaku kou nara mou sude ni kireta wa dakedo watashi no aishiteru toka shinjiteru toka eien da toka de kotoba no ichiban utoka teru no wa kokoro dare demo naku watashi dakera watashi no egao datta ni namida datta ni ikari datta ni to iu kanjou wa kokoro no okuso koto tsumidatte iru to wa kagiranai Last edited by fεяnαndδ; 27th December 2005 at 03:48 AM. |
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Um, okay. I attempted Beautiful Day but I decided I'll do it later. :/
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#10
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Corrections for criminal (i'm SO SORRY i'm being so nitpicky but i wanted to help ^^):
First line should probably be "chinmoku" not "jibun no ku" Fourth line, "munaka" might be "mune ga" Second stanza, 1st line: "mudashi" is probably "watashi" Second stanza, 2nd line: i think "hon ka" should be spaced "honka" End of second stanza, "koto de da kimi ni" sounds more like "koto ga dekinai" Chorus, first line, "to wai ranai" should be spaced "to wa iranai" Chorus, second line, "ira" sounds more like "ii wa" and "tattakau" should be "tatakau" 2nd verse, first line: "tsuyuku aritari" should be "tsuyoku aritai" 2nd verse, third line: "nanitao" should be "nanika wo" 2nd chorus, first line: "tattou itsuku da wo" should be "tadori tsuku darou" 2nd chrorus, 3rd line: "a" should probably be "wa", but it's too hard to hear exactly what she's saying... could be anything really but I know "a" isn't a word on its own. Now for "In the Corner"... First line: "o hito ni" should be "wo hitori" Second line: should probably be "okizuri ni shite kieterishinai" (not sure about that last word though) First chorus, second line should be "shinjiteru toka eien da toka de" First chorus, last line: "de redemo" should be "dare demo" Second verse, second line: "ososhii kunaru" should be "osoroshiku naru" Second chorus, third line should probably be "iu kanjou wa kokoro no okuso koto" Bridge line should probably be "kaku kou nara mou sude ni kireta wa"
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#11
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Yay! Thanks. Edited. ^-^ Are there any more mistakes? >.<
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#12
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And this in English is?
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#13
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How would I know? I can't translate. These are criminal's HEARING lyrics by an amateur, not masa's freaking translations.
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#14
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^He wasnt asking you specifically to translate them, he just wants a translation period. Doesn't really matter who translates it.
I personally think we should wait for a translation (though if someone wants to i don't object) just because when the booklets are released and what not people will have the correct kanji which will allow for ultimately correct translations ^_^ (we don't know if any of the hearing lyrics threads are correct or not!) |
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