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Old 24th November 2007, 07:24 AM
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Old 24th November 2007, 07:43 AM
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Thanks. I corrected the part.

By the way, I'm thinking of adding "yet" to the 9th line.

YET another step back afterwards

Is it no problem?
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Old 25th November 2007, 08:30 AM
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That was very fast!!! Thanks for sharing the lyrics!!!
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Old 25th November 2007, 01:37 PM
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omg i love this lyrics!

firstly, thanks masa for translating of course.

i like it whenever i can get what she's trying to say in her lyrics, and this time i can! of course, she's singing about her relationship with someone she's just broken up with (tomoya...). she's saying like, even though they've broken up he still means a lot to her. it's just he's become somebody who is not somebody to be in a relationship with, much as he means a lot to her. my fav part is

"One day
When I happened to be puzzled a little
By a new and unfamiliar view
Which I must have chosen
The gentle wind just like you
Blew by me"

which probably means as she treads on new grounds, new places which she wanted to discover as she can't stand being in the same place all the time (from her previous few songs, she always sings about how she cannot never change), and feeling a little... unsure, the gentle wind which she's familiar with like she's familiar with him blew by her and comforted her. is it right?
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Old 27th November 2007, 06:15 AM
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Thanks. I corrected the part.

By the way, I'm thinking of adding "yet" to the 9th line.

YET another step back afterwards

Is it no problem?
I'm sure that's fine. It would make it flow a little more smoothly, unless you would like to put a comma after the 8th line.

It seems to be like a "part of Me PART II". However, I like these lyrics a lot more to be honest.
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Old 27th November 2007, 10:29 AM
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It's not like ayu only wrote 3 songs, but around 100. It's natural that she'll use certain elements again, specially if the song's about the same experience, person etc.

"Together When..." is like a siblingsong to "Close to you". In "Close to you" ayu sings that she was tought that the unchanging thing is here, while in "Together When..." she sings that it changed after all. Both songs also share the image of searching for the other person after reincarnation.
Yep, that's exactly right. I actually just got done subbing Close to You for XMAS, and then I read these lyrics and they are the exact opposite reflection of Close to You.
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Old 27th November 2007, 10:29 AM
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omg... this is so heart felt. i love it!
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Old 27th November 2007, 01:01 PM
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10x a lot for the translation! Amazing lyrics ^^
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Old 27th November 2007, 01:42 PM
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Old 27th November 2007, 04:03 PM
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I added "yet" to the 9th line.
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Old 28th November 2007, 04:24 AM
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Thank you! The lyrics are so sad but touching!
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Old 28th November 2007, 05:50 AM
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I love the lyrics! Thanks!
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Old 29th November 2007, 02:05 AM
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Thanks for this. I really love the lyrics. It's very honest.
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Old 29th November 2007, 03:29 AM
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WOOOO a song not about wings

Its a pretty nice song
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Old 29th November 2007, 10:10 PM
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Thank You For The Translation! The Lyrics Are So Sad.
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Old 1st December 2007, 06:15 PM
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Old 2nd December 2007, 11:04 PM
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thank you..beautiful lyrics
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