i-13 "One More Time" lyrics + translation

This was in the downloads section, but I figured it was better posted here for discussion. Thanks to sasasa for the mp3 and lyric link!

Here are the lyrics, in Korean and the Roman alphabet, plus my English translation! The song is really kind of... pushy! It's sung from the point of view of a girl who wants a boy all to herself, and she makes some pretty strong demands. The part marked with an asterisk is where I had a little trouble just wrapping my brain around the concept they were trying to express, but I think I got it in some way, shape, or form.

note: Because letters change sound depending on where they fall in the flow of the sentence, the Korean language is nearly impossible to accurately (or even sensibly) Romanize. There are a million different Romanization systems to use, and I don't like any of them. So I use my own system which is a mixture of all of them; I think it's more accurate to sound, anyway, which is good for singing along to a song.

One More Time
(Korean Lyrics)

One More Time One More Try
One More Time One More Try

흔들리는 널 너도 알고 있는지
그저 아무렇지 않은듯 웃지만

손은 그녈 잡아도 눈은 나를 보잖아
내게 사랑한다 말하는것 같아

널 내게로 이끌꺼야 조금 늦어지는 너일뿐이야
가슴속 그녀도 사랑도 기억들도 버려줘

One More Time One More Try 나를 바라봐 줄래
너의 두눈으로 들어가 가슴을 채울래
Just One More Time 내맘 들키고 싶어
너만을 위해 내가 준비한 이 사랑을

다가 오는게 아직 망설여지니
너의 그녈 버려두기는 미안하니

사랑을 찾아 조금 헤맸을 뿐야
너의 마음가는 그대로 오면 돼

한 걸음만 다가와줘 내가 두걸음 더 다가설께
조금씩 하루씩 너에게 가고 있는 나를봐

One More Time One More Try 나를 바라봐 줄래
너의 두눈으로 들어가 가슴을 채울래
Just One More Time 내맘 들키고 싶어
너만을 위해 내가 준비한 이 사랑을

바라만 본다고 마음을 돌려봐도
자꾸만 가슴은 입술은 머리속은 너만 찾아

One More Time One More Try 너의 마음 보여줘
지금 스치고 지나가면 후회 할지 몰라
Just One More Time 나를 보고 웃잖아
너의 발걸음 나를 향해 오고 있잖아


One More Time
(Romanized Lyrics)

One More Time One More Try
One More Time One More Try

Hûndûllinûn nôl nôdo algo innûnji
Gûjô amurôchi anûndût ujjiman

Sonûn gûnyôl jabado nunûn narûl bojana
Naege saranghanda malhanûngôt gat'a

Nôl naegero ikkûlkkôya jogûm nûjôjinûn nôilppuniya
Gasûmsok kûnyôdo sarangdo giôngdûldo bôryôjwô

One More Time One More Try Narûl barabwa jullae
Nôûi dununûro dûrôga gasûmûl ch'aeullae
Just One More Time Naemam dûlk'igo ship'ô
Nômanûl wihae naega junbihan i sarang'ûl

Daga onûnge ajik mangsôryôjini
Nôûi gunyôl bôryôduginûn mianhani

Sarang'ûl ch'aja jogûm hemaessûl ppunya
Nôûi maûmganûn gûdaero omyôn dwae

Han gôrûmman dagawajwô naega dugôrûm dô dagasôlkke
Jogûmsshik harusshik nôege gago innûn narûlbwa

One More Time One More Try Narûl barabwa jullae
Nôûi dununûro dûrôga gasûmûl ch'aeullae
Just One More Time Naemam dûlk'igo ship'ô
Nômanûl wihae naega junbihan i sarang'ûl

Baraman bondago maûmûl dollyôbwado
Jakkuman gasûmûn ibsurûn môrisogûn nôman ch'aja

One More Time One More Try Nôûi maûm boyôjwô
Jigûm sûch'igo jinagamyôn huhoé halji molla
Just One More Time Narûl bogo ujjana
Nôûi balgôrûm narûl hyanghae ogo ijjana


One More Time
(English Translation)

One More Time One More Try
One More Time One More Try

I wonder if you know you're shaking.
It's just, you're laughing uneasily.

Your hand takes her, but aren't your eyes watching me?
It's like when you say "I love you", it's to me.

I lead you to me, but you're just taking a little too long.
Throw away what's in your heart: her, your love, your memories.

One More Time One More Try Stare at me
I'll go into your two eyes and fill your heart.
Just One More Time I want my heart to be caught.
This love I've prepared is just for you.

If you were still hesitant to get closer to me,
I'm sorry that you already got rid of your girlfriend.

You searched for love and just got a little lost,
But you should go the way your heart did.

You get one step closer, and I'll get two.
Watch me get to you little by little, day by day.

One More Time One More Try Stare at me
I'll go into your two eyes and fill your heart.
Just One More Time I want my heart to be caught.
This love I've prepared is just for you.

Even if you change your mind just by staring,
In my head I'll look more and more for your chest, your lips, just you. *

One More Time One More Try Show me your heart.
If you brush past me now, you might regret it.
Just One More Time Aren't you looking at me and smiling?
Aren't your steps headed my way?

[Joel]

!!! Your awesome! Ty!

[littlefairyfromnam]

Wow. Thats kind of disturbing, considering the little girls in the group...