Stay Gold - Thoughts on Hikaru Utada

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Your commitment to Utada Hikaru is admirable! What a lovely thing to share to everyone. I have just a few criticisms ^^"

First, try not to repeat too much. you wrote in the beginning that Utada is an American but you kept writing it again afterward. Assume that the reader has a good memory.
Your choice of words concerning Ayumi is dangerous. No one is born musically talented. It is a skill acquired through experience and practice, isn't it? Wouldn't you agree that both Utada and Ayumi have acquired this skill? Ayumi has composed many times. She started with composing almost all songs of "I am..." in case you did not know. Describing her as "musically talentless" is controversial. Reconsider your words.
Last, this is a diary writing so you did not cite any sources, of course, but I can tell you were trying to write this like a professional article. However, I read many things that are simply suspicions and bias opinions. Be aware of harsh reactions to your writing even if you did not ask for it.