ANother song thoughts/opinions

[Kanzaki]

It seriously just sounds like it's been made overnight in Fruitloops .
I don't have a problem with the melody, but it's so forgettable. And it sounds like it just needs so much more work.
Their voices...I actually think Ayu's voice was nowhere near as good as Urata's. I don't really like his technique, but his voice is clear and he doesn't sound strained. Sounds almost like they decided to have some fun and play around mixing songs and they smacked this, half-finished track on FIVE.

It's sad, because I really believe that this song had some potential, but it just...Idk. It's not good