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Old 14th October 2006, 05:39 PM
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This part... is very special to me. Maybe it's pretty cliche or generic, but I love it to bits.


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Old 14th October 2006, 05:54 PM
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thank you for your great translation
nice lyrics!
I love it
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Old 14th October 2006, 05:56 PM
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mm.... it sounds like Ayu is speaking to Tomoya.... ^_^
maybe she dedicate it to him
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:08 PM
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ooo. thank you sooo much the translation! The lyrics sound very beautiful.
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:10 PM
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Nice lyrics ^^

Btw, this part "My precious treasure" it remembers me to gollum LoL


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Old 14th October 2006, 06:16 PM
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thanks for the lyrics!!!!
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:25 PM
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mm.... it sounds like Ayu is speaking to Tomoya.... ^_^
maybe she dedicate it to him
If it says "for my honey" in the booklet of the album we'll know for sure.
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:27 PM
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oh! i love the very poetic lyrics!
thanks for the excellent translation!
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:37 PM
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Oh yes, forgot to say, "taisetsu na takaramono" -> "my precious treasure," made me go wahhhhhh omg repeated lyrics from RAINBOW! Wooooo. When stuff is repeated,
1. uninspirational writer
2. extra significance

And we all know surely #2 is the case... In RAINBOW, this phrase referred to a part of herself, yes? But here...seems much more external. I hope that people won't bash her for reusing this phrase verbatim because it can be a very powerful literary tool that can be used to draw comparisons and link things together very poignantly. Maybe this phrase has a special significance to her...probably does. Maybe it's something between her and her honey...
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Old 14th October 2006, 06:52 PM
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Oh yes, forgot to say, "taisetsu na takaramono" -> "my precious treasure," made me go wahhhhhh omg repeated lyrics from RAINBOW! Wooooo. When stuff is repeated,
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There is something we must remember about RAINBOW lyrics.
Is that Avex publish the song in the internet without the lyrics, so the people who had buy the disc could download it. They call the fans to write their own lyrics for RAINBOW and sent it to them, so they choose the best ones and compose the lyrics with them. This was posted a long time ago, I think.

So Ayu isn't repeat the same words, because she didn't wrote RAINBOW by herself, gotcha? ^^U
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Old 14th October 2006, 07:00 PM
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The RAINBOW version that was released online together with the RAINBOW album didn't have any lyrics by what I know, it was just an instrumental/beta version I think.

The song came in it's full version on A BALLADS.
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very pretty, a lot more descriptive/poetic than most of her lyrics
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Old 14th October 2006, 07:41 PM
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There is something we must remember about RAINBOW lyrics.
Is that Avex publish the song in the internet without the lyrics, so the people who had buy the disc could download it. They call the fans to write their own lyrics for RAINBOW and sent it to them, so they choose the best ones and compose the lyrics with them. This was posted a long time ago, I think.

So Ayu isn't repeat the same words, because she didn't wrote RAINBOW by herself, gotcha? ^^U

I believe it's been established that the notes that fans sent in served as inspiration for Ayu. I think that when it says lyrics written by Ayumi Hamasaki, it means wholly written by her. My impression of her character is that she really cares about expressing herself, and that she would not take someone else's lyrics verbatim. In other words, the lyrics to RAINBOW are still her lyrics; it just happened that in this case, she invited her fans to be a more direct source of inspiration.
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Old 14th October 2006, 07:54 PM
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Thanks for the translation! I love the lyrics!
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Old 14th October 2006, 08:03 PM
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Thanks for the translation (helped me figure out if my translation was accurate or not ); sad song indeed.
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Old 14th October 2006, 09:51 PM
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Old 14th October 2006, 10:01 PM
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I'm starting to hate how she's repeatable recently... she used to have more variety of lyrics...
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Old 14th October 2006, 10:10 PM
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Thx for the translation. I love Ayu's writing. it does match the song itself

If you come across deep sorrow
I wish you will share it with me
I'll be able to do anything for the smile
My precious treasure
My precious treasure ...

how touching is that
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Old 14th October 2006, 10:15 PM
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Absolutely beautiful, thanks masa!!
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Old 14th October 2006, 10:35 PM
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I'm starting to hate how she's repeatable recently... she used to have more variety of lyrics...
I agree They're sweet lyrics, but she repeats this theme too much.
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